One day two bats landed on the ground. Why they did this, I cannot tell. But they landed in a grassy place, and found it to their liking. The grass was soft and cool, so they were discussing whether or not to stay. Soon, however, they discovered that they could not leave, even if they had wanted. Bats, they found, cannot take flight from the ground, since they cannot raise themselves up and spread their wings.
Everyone knows, bats are made for hanging up-side down. But on the ground, bats can only drag themselves around on their little back feet and their hands. In this posture, they can only look down or straight ahead. The cannot look up into the sky.
So, with some sadness, they set out to make the place their home. As the weeks and months passed, the two ground bats reproduced, and their offspring reproduced, and soon a whole colony of bats came to live on the ground in the grassy place. All the other animals began to call them the Ground Bats, and the colony became known as Ground Bat Town, which eventually was shortened to Grombiton. The place seemed like home to all the Ground Bats.
Of all the bats in Grombiton, only two could speak of the joys of flying. But the idea of flight—even the idea of "sky"—remained a mystery to the generation that had never flown or looked up into the evening sky. For the original two could not very well describe how it happened, only that it did. They could not describe the sky, only that it was large, and it was "up there." They could not explain to the others the mechanics of flying, for when they were flying bats, they never gave consideration to what it is that makes a bat able to fly. They simply grew up flying almost from the day of their birth. So, naturally, now that they were Ground Bats, they were at a loss as to how flight could be accomplished. Flight came to be something of a myth to the flightless Ground Bats.
Over time, the flightless generation taught themselves to do many things bats were never supposed to learn. Like hole-digging, and worm-finding, and grub-growing, and mushroom-hunting. They became quite good at these things, but always, there was a sense inside them that, they weren't made for this. Of course, they could not completely shake this sense, for they were bats.
One day, a young bat wandered from Grombiton. Why he crawled away, I cannot tell. But he set out in a certain direction, and kept crawling until he reached the end of the grass. After the grass ended, the ground became very smooth, for it was bare rock. Still he continued to crawl, until at last he reached the end of the rock around evening time, the time of day when flying bats take flight to hunt for food. And at the end of the rock, there was—nothing.
Now, the young bat had never been to a place where there was nothing under him, for he had never flown, nor had any of the bats from Grombiton ever been up "on" anything. None of them had experienced the sensation of looking down farther than the ground underneath them. The young bat peered down over the edge, but not being able to see very far, and being unaccustomed to the effects of gravity on a body, he simply tumbled right over. It was a long way down, and he began to fall. It seemed a long time to him, but in a moment, and without thinking about it, he spread his wings and took flight. Up he went, and over, and round and round, darting this way and that. Flying, as well and as nimbly as any bat had ever flown!
"How can this be?" he thought. He squealed with delight, and to his surprise, he discovered that by squealing, he could 'see' flying bugs everywhere, and he filled his belly with them. This shouldn't surprise us, for he was a bat after all—flying and eating bugs is what bats do.
After he was full, he decided he would return to Grombiton and tell his friends what had happened. It took him only a few seconds to travel back to the colony, and as he landed, he tumbled over and over, rolling right into the middle of a small gathering of Ground Bats.
"I flew!" he said.
The Ground Bats crawled nearer to him, and looked at him closely. "You have a great imagination," was all they said to him. The more he tried to explain how it had happened, the less they believed him, and the more they pitied him. And because he, like the two original bats, could not explain how it had happened, he failed to convince anyone that he had actually flown.
The seeds for this story were planted a long time ago. I have the rest of the story already, but it has not been written out.
ReplyDeleteI thought I'd give you a chance to add to it, and see where it goes. I'll post my ending in a few days.
brother, this is awesome.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to the rest of it in the future.
I pray that God daily bids me crawl to the Rock!
ReplyDeleteGreat story so far!
This is a very familiar story.
ReplyDeleteThe problem with the ground bats was that they kept tripping over their silly wings. Besides that they pretty much had life working. Mushrooming was one of the first industries. Several died in the process but once a few learned through empirical experimentation which shrooms were edible, they systemized their selection, harvesting, and storage. But this industry depended too heavily on luck and favorable environmental conditions. So worming and grubbing came along. These required more work but were less heuristic. And this spawned several cottage industries. Some bats specialized in hole digging. And then another cottage industry sprang up to support hole diggers—water delivery. Some bats discovered that they could cup their wings in a certain way to transport clean water to the digger bats. This type of innovation, specialization, and complication went through several iterations until someone came up with a word for it. They called it progress. But they noted that with progress came problems. Sanitation, pollution, waste, and more than a few bats fell in uncovered holes.
Besides that, the bats realized some things about competition. On the one hand competition among the bats made everyone more eager to trade with each other, accelerating what they called progress. On the other hand, competition seemed to bring an endless stream of hype with it, with each bat trying to convince all the others that he was the better bat and that you actually needed him to have a fulfilling ground bat life.
In time, leaders arose, bats who were true students of life and progress and all that is, bats who became sellers not of goods and services but of right and of wrong and of power, bats who eventually came to be looked to for rules, bats who handed out sanctions for those who were naughty and praises for those who were nice.
But all of this is just background for the real problem. The real problem was, as I said, the wings. They really got in the way when hole digging, mushroom gathering, and even competing. In short, they were a huge barrier to the evolution of progress in Grombiton. The leader bats looked down on wings. Of all the issues of life and progress and all that is, wings were the great enigma. They were the one thing that couldn’t be made to fit into one of the many systems of Grombiton. They were the one thing that defied ruling. In time, many of the bats actually had their wings removed by specialists who had learned the art of flint sharpening and blood coagulation using a special secretion in their saliva. These wingless bats were told and then believed that it was better to just have them removed than to keep getting tripped up by them. But actually, what was more troubling to them than the tripping was the nagging feeling that they were meant for something, but if that were true…
Sam, Me too! Me too!
ReplyDeleteSteve, dude. What can I say? When truth begins to flow, who can stop it? Silly wings, indeed. What good are they?
--Jon
The fact that no one believed him puzzled the Bat Who Flew a great deal. "Why will they not believe that I flew?" he wondered. And for many days he tried to convince the Ground Bats that he had flown.
ReplyDeleteHe noticed that the more he tried to convince them that he had flown, the less he could remember just what it was like.
One day a young bat came up very close to him and said, "Did you really fly?"
Now the Bat Who Flew had not spoken of flying for many days, so this question took him by surprise. In fact, he had to pause a moment and remember himself whether or not he had actually flown.
"Yes, yes I did," he finally said.
The young bat smiled and looked down at the ground. "Wow," he whispered. Then he looked up and asked, "What was it like?"
The Bat Who Flew looked at the young bat, and said, "It was the most incredible thing that has ever happened to me."
"How DID it happen?" asked the young bat, inching closer, as if being closer made it more exciting.
The Bat Who Flew thought for a minute again, because he couldn't remember exactly how it had happened. So he said, "One minute I was crawling along on the smooth ground, and the next I was flying."
Of course, a great deal happened between crawling on the rock and the flying, but that was how he recalled it.
"Do you think you will ever fly again?" asked the young bat.
"I hope so," said the Bat Who Flew.
"Me too," answered the young bat. Then he added, "If you ever do, would you take me with you?"
Now, it hadn't occurred to the Bat Who Flew that perhaps he could help other bats to fly. Ever since he tumbled out of the sky back into Grombiton, he had only been concerned with convincing the others that he had flown.
So the question from the young bat struck him oddly.
"Well, I suppose so. I mean, I didn't have to practice myself, so I suppose you might be able to fly as well."
"When can we go?" asked the young bat.
We must forgive the Bat Who Flew for being taken aback by this question as well, for he had only flown once, after all. But the idea of flying again simply had not occurred to him. So he thought for another minute, and finally said, "Tomorrow. Let's go tomorrow."
[to be continued]
Wow. Nice advance of the story line. Did you read the thread I started on RH called "Are you doing it?"
ReplyDeleteI'm not much of a right-brain person, so all I have to say is I am continuing to enjoy the heck out of following this story.
ReplyDeleteJohn,
ReplyDeleteNow that's an intriguing comment. In all my mythicizing, I had not considered the effect of "story" (faerie, parable, etc.) in terms of "left brain" and "right brain."
How does imagination play out in a left-brainer compared to a right-brainer?
I just realized that God has given me almost the same story twice, but the ending only once. I have never been given the ending for The Jungle and the Great Plain.
ReplyDeleteIn Escape from Grombiton, God has given me the ending for both stories.
Funny how these stories percolate inside and find their way out.
it's not so much the effect or how it plays out. Even to a mostly left-brainer like me, there is no difficulty at all in digesting or relishing the story.
ReplyDeleteI commented on the l/r brain simply from the standpoint of how amazingly you've crafted reality into story, and then how easily Steve chimed right in. Awesome.
This is an awesome story. I am going to read it to my kids.
ReplyDeleteThanks, bluesbaby. I read a little of your poetry on your blog. I'm not a big poetry reader, but if a poem keeps my attention to the end, it's a success. I read three of yours, and couldn't stop.
ReplyDeleteIs this your glory? Is your life a poem in the making?